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Thanks for the reply. I really appreciate the information you gave me with this.

I hadn’t heard of Kulkinsky before, so knowing that context is definitely nice to have. The metaphorical scenes are also a lot more interesting with this in mind. I had worked out the dangers of modern capitalism meaning for the oil(mainly thanks to it being called the rich man’s blood at one point), and the animal exploitation detail is quite clever, especially with that metaphor being mixed in with the oil.

Knowing where the letter is from, and the potential reason as to how it could have been sent also definitely adds impact to the scene.

Sorry to hear about your motivation problems, and you are welcome, as your story was definitely worth leaving feedback for.