Talk:Writing sample (need title)/@comment-25326462-20140820025546

You did a good job in this. I feel if you work at it more you could get it so it doesnt feel so set up. Other than that good job! Would you mind taking a look at mine?

http://pokepasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_blog:The.Cosmic.Pokemon/Rick%27s_Red_Cartridge