Talk:PokePasta- I won't miss you, Mew./@comment-6907100-20140401093910

t's an interesting plot, and I understand where the twist is supposed to come into all this.

But, it could use a bit better of an execution (just my personal opinion). Details always make a story better, and, this story is too short to pull of something so complicated a game world switching with reality. Maybe the person starts to slowly realize that everything around them is starting to resemble Pokemon. Maybe they make note that names are changing, that people are wearing sweaters that they normally wouldnt and that they resemble games the character own or Pokemon in their BLUE party?

Just my siggestion(s). Either way, keep up the good work.