Talk:Strange Pokemon X Copy/@comment-6907100-20171207222443

Not a bad start. There is a lot of options when writing about a hacked or glitched game...

But, if you wanted to make it better for next time, you need a little more of a plot. Some suggestions would be finding out more about the creepy cashier...like the main character finding out that the guy did not actually work there, and adding more symbols or secrets in the glitched game that somehow point to the cashier as the cause. But keep writing! Just remember, the more details, the better! Also having a solid plot with a strong finish (ending) will go a long way! :)