User blog comment:Netscapenavigaytor/Pokepasta Reviews/@comment-25164650-20190619194359/@comment-37992760-20190619211749

won't do a proper review for now, just some thoughts after reading it:

i didn't enjoy it much as a creepypasta, but as a roleplay-turned-story i really like how it gave closure to Lonliness (and made that silly "put the E where it belongs" thing sorta make sense... actually in general i like how it made Abandon Lonliness make sense!). it's got some awkwardness to its writing (some odd word choice, weirdly present tense) but not anything that made it too hard to read. i don't think i'd call it a great story imo, but MAN that must've been fun as a roleplay for the authors :D

(pluuuuus despite what i say about it, Abandon Lonliness is a super sentimental 'pasta for me and anything to do with Lonliness gets me excited even if it makes me sad ^^;)