Talk:Platinum Forest/@comment-6907100-20130506151724

I gave this pasta 3 different categories because I'm not really sure where it belongs. Obviously it is a hacked game with real-life interference, and it is obvious a tall-tale about Pokemon, and lastly, it mixes Slenderman with Pokemon (not to be confused with the Poke-Slender pages I will be doing soon). So...we will leave it like that for awhile.

But as far as comments go, this was a good start to Pokepasta writing. It was an interesting story and I like the different factors involved. I think if it had just a little more length and detail to it and some grammar adjustments then this could really prove to be something awesome. I would love to see a game-hack of this in-real-life...and I hope to see more material from you soon :)

Good job and keep writing!