Talk:Gengar Zone/@comment-38656228-20190301002346/@comment-38656228-20190326170626

I'm going to re-write a lot of this now. thanks for the criticism, all I knew at the time was I wanted something with Gengar and the safari zone. I was trying to avoid cliches, but I see that I need to include some to make the story move along. The Clefairy being the last one to die was a coincidence, I only remember a few gen 1 pokemon, but I plan on revising it to have more meaning. As for the pokeball death, I'll have to revise that, it does sound stupid a bit, but I wanted something unique. Hopefully I'll finish a draft by tomorrow.

~G