Talk:Ashes, Ashes/@comment-26248684-20160509012512/@comment-67.253.185.144-20170406141724

I agree. This has great potential, but wasn't well executed. Try expanding on Ho-oh's condition as well as it's trainer but try not to use cliches. That can be tough, but I'm sure that you can think of something. Maybe try to expand on the trainers' rivalry with each other.