Talk:Wilted Flower/@comment-26480939-20200524173714

Oh, for the love of-

You DON'T capitalize every word in a sentence and expect people to just accept it. That's not how you English. You also don't need to put every line from your Pokémon in quote format. All that does is break up the flow of the story and makes it choppy to read. Leave it as simple text without using quote markup. Work on your grammar a bit too. I see the word 'Throwed' show up relatively often. The word you want is threw. Also, the attack used by Charizard is 'Flamethrower', one word, no space between 'Flame' and 'thrower'. Lavender Town is in Kanto, and thus not in Unova, where Gen 5 takes place. If you must use a 'haunted' location in this story, then use the Celestial Tower instead. And what would burning your SD card even accomplish? Unless you use a DSi, I believe all save data is stored on the game card itself, without any need of outside storage. (If I'm wrong on the DSi, please let me know, because I never used one before, because it didn't have a GBA slot. I played these on the DS Lite, so my experience was different.)