Talk:Writing sample (need title)/@comment-6907100-20130719210849/@comment-11793353-20130719233756

Thanks for the feedback! I honestly appreciate it. This is clearly NOT DONE! I have another chapter coming soon, but the story starts in Ethan's POV because it takes place during Gold/Silver/HG/SS. Right after Red became the champion, even though Lance takes his fame soon after. His starter, Cyndaquil, gets trapped in a coma, and if he dies while his asleep, he dies in real life, so that's where this story is going... He will meet other Pokèmon along the way that help him. It also happens that these Pokèmon are also Pokèmon that Ethan catches in reality. Soooo yeah..... I think Standstill is a good name, thanks!