Talk:Dark Nuvema/@comment-67.172.219.77-20140806234526

A few things....

The Lavender town theme is overused. It wasn't needed.

Gore doesn't equal scary. A LITTLE bit is alright, but you went overboard.

I loved this Pokepasta, it was fun to read, and wasn't half bad. You could've added more, though. Why was your character forced to kill the Pokemon? Also, another little nitpick, the screeching out of the DS was overused.