Talk:The Curse of the Forest/@comment-67.253.160.155-20160620204821/@comment-28792788-20160621004322

(Note that I didn't post that first comment) Maybe you could just simply make it a bit longer by... Continuing on or saying what happens to the character? Or maybe explaining it from the Pokemon's or Nurse Joy's POV? I dunno, just a suggestion. Other than that, I love it!