Talk:Dark Nuvema/@comment-6907100-20130421134418

It's not a bad Pasta at all...especially for a first attempt. I know how frustrating these things can get sometimes and all the walls that you run into while writing a story, so I congratulate you on completing this project.

There were very few grammatical errors...the one thing I was hoping to see more of was the back story of hat had happened to the town and why your sprite was targeted as having killed the other Pokemon. I think there was a lot that was left unexplained, but I would love to draw this ENTITY creature because it sounds really badass.

Keep up the good work!! :D