Talk:Unwanted/@comment-6907100-20171222145622

Really good detail!

I feel bad for Reject. I never abuse my Pokemon and makes me sad when others do, even if it is just a game. Some advice for next time: work on separating quotations so that everything doesn't string together. I know this was taken from a creepypasta site, but some editing can make a pasta 10x better :)

It follows a very basic theme but it comes off as a bit unnerving so, not a bad read :)