Talk:Pokemon Dark Blue/@comment-24904235-20140505074045

PastalsCreepy, I have seen some of your other work, and not to sound rude but I didnt not find them to be necissarily good or inspired, however this pasta here is actually quite good. You've deffinitly improved your story telling with this when and although the story is somewhat generic for a creepy pasta, overall you did a good job, keep up the good work! :)