Talk:Mother/@comment-6907100-20130402134817

In the story, it's hard to tell when you are talking about the hacked game, and when you are talking about real-life. I really like the idea of the demonic possession though. With a little bit of editing, this story would make more sense and be a tad-bit easier to read.

I will leave it to you in order to do this unless you would like some help :D