Talk:Xerneas' Revenge(Part 1)/@comment-26480939-20200524181425

Not bad by any means, and I certainly would enjoy seeing part 2. But one thing confuses me: why did you try to use Draco Meteor on a Fairy-type? You also seem to not understand that Fairies are both immune to and super-effective against Dragon-types. (As evidenced by the "for some weird reason" bit. Dragon-types were deemed to be getting too powerful, so they introduced the Fairy-type in Gen 6 to counter that Power Creep. Somewhat like Gen 2 introducing Dark-types and Steel-types to counter the Game Breaker nature of the Psychic-type.) So you wouldn't be able to even put so much as a scratch on demon!Xerneas with that move. You did show some Genre Savviness by using Steel-type moves on it, which makes that 'using a move with no chance of damaging the opponent' bit earlier even MORE confusing. Also, that Naruto reference completely clashes with this being a Poképasta. Maybe explain that in more general terms to make it easier to understand for people who don't watch/read that series. Because I can guarantee you, an average reader who knows a lot about Pokémon but nothing about Naruto would just be confused as to why you just namedropped a Shinto goddess as if it were a move. (If they even knew enough about Shintoism to even grasp that it was a mythology reference. If they didn't, they'd be even MORE confused.)