Talk:Pokemon Special Pikachu/@comment-6907100-20140401094417

Interesting.

Could use some work, separate your words and dialogue so that they are easier to read. I like the way the cartridge is dripping with blood and black gunk every time is throws itself out of the system. It's neat. But still, this pasta could use some elements to make it more scary.

Over all though, not bad, and good work.