Talk:Aka The Latias/@comment-173.240.120.239-20140109050323

Now, I do t want to be too cruel to this story I understand you've put lots of work into this but, you could easily pick any other topic, for one why another story about a pokemon being abanded and coming back? Aswell as it being bloody, and well you know "FAKE"! It's very unrealistic and needs more work I found many errors and stuff that needs to be totally rewritten. Especially the parts were you try to make it creepy but it doesn't play in your favor try better next time :/