Thread:LilithTheShinyMew/@comment-25791545-20190629001842

Please start putting more effort into your pastas. They are not up to quality control standards, as I've mentioned before, and if they don't get better, I'm going to start moving them to the forum. If you're willing to listen, I have a couple of tips for improving them, which I will put in this post.

1) Not every word should be capitalized. Only the first word of each sentence, names, and the word "I" should be.

2) Use periods. As it is now, your whole pastas are a single run-on sentence. I think you could replace all the commas you use with periods and be fine.

3) Don't write about a messed up game or a murderous Pokemon unless you have a new twist to put on it. I've seen what's essentially the exact same pasta over and over again from you, and the concept is already overused.

I mean as little offense as possible with this message. I genuinely want to see you improve, and writing the same story, with incorrect grammar to boot, is not the way to do it. 