Talk:Torracat's Discovery/@comment-6907100-20170620122052

Interesting Pokepasta. It is always different to see things from the Pokemon's POV (point-of-view).

Some suggestions for future pastas...I liked the idea of the 4th Wall and how there is one human controlling their little world from this dimension. That part was really cool actually...but Kadabra's explination started to not make sense towards the end. I would look into rewording it and really taking your time to explain how this all works because it was a great idea.

Other than that, it was neat to see what the Pokemon inside the game see when a game gets hacked. I liked how they started seeing the people and Pokemon glitch and dissolve, but I wish there was more detail there. You could have made it much more creepy had you taken your time and really drawn out the detail.

The whole thing had a great basis but it felt really rushed. Other than that, good job! :D