Talk:Abused flareon/@comment-67.253.185.144-20170406154010

Tje only good thing about this pasta was the fact that it didnt go overboard with the gore. But hinestly this story had no plot'' at all. ''It was like it was trying to be scary for the sake of being scary, which, by the way, didn't work. And did the narrator have to criticize'' everything? That got really annoying. ''However, there is potential for this.