Talk:The Hacked Red Cartridge/@comment-6907100-20130414211738

An interesting start.

I mean, I know that the person posting this did not write it...but as far as comments go, I feel the story went too fast and basically they just mixed a bunch of pastas together to create one story. It might be something I come to edit in the future because I believe a lot can be done with this particular tale if someone takes the time to do it.