Talk:Blue's Tears/@comment-35051855-20200731045734

My thoughts, I thought this Pokepasta for the most part was really good. It didn't have any grammatical errors (that I noticed), it created good atmosphere, had an gripping revenge story, and it was an interesting take on the effect the player has on the rival. I'll admit, it was pretty unnerving...that is, until the end. The whole "if you die in the game, you die for real" trope has become so desperate and cliche, it's laughable at this point. Not to mention having real life murders being connected to this really wasn't needed, Blue getting revenge on Red for the events of the game was enough.

All in all, 8/10, would definitely be higher if not for the ending.