Talk:LUNA's Control/@comment-67.253.185.144-20170621005218

This was bad. And not in a good way. Seriously, this is just infested with cliches. Overpowered demonic pokemon, with levels of 666, WaRbLeD tExT that is not' in any way scary 'AT ALL,'' Legendary pokemon dying for no reason - in a sense, death for the sake of death - way  too many unnecessary punctuation marks and last of all, the main protagonist is an idiot. Did you try at all to make a decent story?