Talk:You don't belong here like this./@comment-30919645-20190715023042

Hey, to anyone who read this to the end, thank you! I thought that putting an author's note in the article itself may be appropriate so here it is.

This is my first Pokepasta, so I am completely ready to hear anything anyone has to say about this. I've been intrigued with these for many years and I'm glad to finally contribute. I know it's a bit similar to Tarnished Gold in that they both follow Silver, but I hope that I was able to change it up at least enough to make it its own original thing.

Mainly my concerns lie with buildup and character attachment, or if I even achieved enough of a "scary" factor. Or perhaps I made this pasta a bit too long and detailed? Let me know, I'd love to improve, and possibly write something else for this considering the ending, which may also help to alleviate some of the criticism for this one.