Talk:The truth within them/@comment-26157101-20150302202925/@comment-67.253.185.144-20170619155856

Minor grammar and typographical errors?! This entire story was a shitstorm of atrocious grammar and trypographical errors. This doesn't deserve the 9/10 rating. Honestly, I think it's more of a 4/10.However,  If whomever wrote this was, like, nine, then I'd cut them some slack. If they expanded more on the plot and put a lot of more detail, then I'd change my rating.